My idea. Maybe take out the explosions and slow down the text, and spread out the features over a longer period of time. Maybe say to some other footage of the server. Here are some possible video's of our server that I could get cuts from. I've got a lot more footage, but at lest gives you and idea of some of the content.
Mine Cart Ride:
I've got a lot more, but you get the idea. Anyone else have videos, or thoughts they would like to contribute?